PROJECT 4-Participation

The images are really small, maybe make them a little larger If possible, also fix your text so that it is either right aligned or left aligned. http://jaromando-gdd110.blogspot.com/

I really love the feel of this layout! It works well with the games original design. However The titles for each paragraph I'd try bolding them or making the font a little bigger so they stand out a little better http://bheisenberg-gdd110.blogspot.com

Your layout is aesthetically appealing, my only dilemma is under the last title there is less white space between the title and text then the others. Keep the white space consistent. http://mbfishman-gdd110.blogspot.com

This is a very unique design. I love how you added stick figures that interact with your graphics. The text however in the top right should be aligned better within the box. There is too much space towards the bottom and too little towards the top. http://dnkhan-gdd110.blogspot.com

I really love the design, however fix the white space distribution.  http://edleclair32-gdd110.blogspot.com

I really like the layout of this piece. It is aesthetically pleasing to the eye. The only thing that throws it off is the "Overview" title. It's significantly smaller then the others. http://mmensher-gdd110.blogspot.com

There is way too much white space , and maybe try to use white background boxes for behind the text, instead of just one big white box. It makes it look like two separate pieces. http://rperricelli-gdd110.blogspot.com

I think you should have used a different color gradient for the top. The title text is getting a little lost. http://jverducci-gdd110.blogspot.com

I think you have a lot of white space in your document, maybe try to add larger images to fill the space. I also feel the border around the text is not adding much to the piece.http://aweitzner-gdd110.blogspot.com 

I should have added more images, and created a better layout for my piece. It's extremely dull.